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Thursday March 23, 2006 at 10:38 am

March 23, 2006 at 6:38 pm · Filed under Rigamarole

Does writing poetry make me sound emo?
I like it regardless.

I was looking through my old poetry blog and realized that I haven’t written poetry in a really long time… Reading the words made me realize how much I miss playing with words and meanings and sounds… and inspired me to write this this morning:

where has it gone?/the inspiration/my indication/that my soul is
alive/thrives/somewhere out there/bare and alone/tiny, vulnerable and
prone/ to over-indulgence of the worst kind/my mind/crumbles and
falls/tumbles and crawls/fumbles and mauls/its way through the deep
abyss of soulessness/i dive/into the pits of listlessness/without
flesh/barely dressed/repressed/depressed/helpless and lost…

because i can’t find myself anymore.

To be honest, I wasn’t going to post this, because it feels a bit personal and being personal is always a little embarassing. :)

I hope you enjoyed this piece of my mind.

And for those of you who are bored.. Here’s a picture of me from a few years ago that I JUST found today… I don’t even remember it…. Don’t i seem like a lolita complex’s dreamboat?

michinyon said,

March 23, 2006 @ 10:44 am

Sometimes, I wake up and I don’t even know where I am.
I mean, I’m always home, in my bed, but waking up bleary-eyed and confused is… whatever.
Once, for Halloween, seven of my friends and I dressed up as “naughty schoolgirls” and went to the club. We were eight of hundreds of naughty schoolgirls that night.

yewj said,

March 23, 2006 @ 10:52 am

nice poem!!

tHexDonStER said,

March 23, 2006 @ 10:56 am

nope it makes the xanga world more interesting.

SensesFail250 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 10:58 am

that picture is gonna get you more comments than your poem lol  =/
you’re really bold for posting that poem. id never post anything that was as personal as that haha

AristotleForDummies said,

March 23, 2006 @ 11:03 am

if it isn’t personal and emabarassing, then what’s the point of even doing this?

kyleeuin said,

March 23, 2006 @ 11:05 am

I think the word EMO covers a broad range of things

Yosho said,

March 23, 2006 @ 11:10 am

roses are redviolets are blueur poetry is prettyand you are tooahhahahaa *^_^*

ClimaxOF___pickleSEX said,

March 23, 2006 @ 11:13 am

I like your poetry.I just write what I am thinking.What I call Poetry is more like my personal Journal.

MrWain said,

March 23, 2006 @ 11:29 am

Inspiration is brought upon by many different things.  Maybe you’ll run into something that will trigger it again.  Hope you are doing well, drama is always sucky!

airina05 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 11:30 am

that’s a hot picture.
and your poem is great – it sounds exactly what i was going through a few weeks ago

O_2627 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 11:44 am

it’s not emo. it’s an art. you wouldn’t call a painter emo, right?lovely poem. i admire anyone who can put words together like that.

CaKaLusa said,

March 23, 2006 @ 12:03 pm

never too emo…haha, cute pic.

Scorpi said,

March 23, 2006 @ 12:15 pm

nerd rocker it is!\/

franksabunch said,

March 23, 2006 @ 12:21 pm

Emo? Naw….you need to be pathetic to be emo also. :-D

eklipse126 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 12:38 pm

Back in the old room!

gooksantiger said,

March 23, 2006 @ 12:45 pm

when u write a poem about guns and gangs and yo mamas, it becomes rap. haha

altoidaddict88 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 12:57 pm

haha, i like gooksantiger’s comment.good poem and being personal occasionally is what keeps readers coming back…everyone wants to know more. thanks for making the day a little less boring.

donnies_gurl said,

March 23, 2006 @ 12:58 pm

i think you should keep writing. :)

Lemon451 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 1:21 pm

Oh noes…school girl. Back to the dominatrix necro in Guild Wars!

aydongbeeleef said,

March 23, 2006 @ 1:22 pm

ducks falling down stairswings don’t work at this juncturequacky.. extra crispy…-cake =Pnothing compares to how artistic/expressive/intense ‘youth’ can be.

wdupITSjustin said,

March 23, 2006 @ 1:32 pm

nice piece.  It feels weird for me to say this since I don’t personally know you, but I hope everything is going well for you.  =)
I think free writing is good for the soul and very therapeautic when in need of someone/something to confide in.  It is a direct reflection of what we feel at that moment in time, so later we can look back and say, wow…I’ve come a long way from hell, then realize you are a better person because of it. 
Take care of yourself.

loldavelol said,

March 23, 2006 @ 1:49 pm

i admire people who can write poetry — that’s something i can’t do easily.  you know sometimes you have to be emotional (whether of good emotions or bad ones) to be inspired.  happy people can’t really create great masterpieces (poetry or art).  in a way, being sad right now is bringing your writing juices back.

ceciliotis said,

March 23, 2006 @ 1:51 pm

Hah, it’s depressing how people can be called emo for so many stupid reasons now. And i guess the fact that i said that it’s depressing makes me emo.anyway.

dearmisery said,

March 23, 2006 @ 2:04 pm

we all have a little emo in ourselves =)

bjtdevera said,

March 23, 2006 @ 2:22 pm

what’s a lolita’s complex dreamboat?

AzNkPrInCeSs said,

March 23, 2006 @ 2:24 pm

Writing poems is awesome! It’s not as emo as people may think.

davidngo said,

March 23, 2006 @ 2:34 pm

pic is broken.  like your heart.  (now THAT’s emo)

Jeina419 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 2:54 pm

You put up something personal, thats tough. since your words inspired me to write….. so heres one of mine:
On the lonely seesawWaiting while you pretended not to be lonelyIf you sat downOur feelings would balance outAnd I think you’ll get used to smilingOn the lonely seesawWaiting for no one, waiting for someone to comeThe feeling that I want to see youLike the midwinter blue skyHas grown in my heart.

jimmiwin said,

March 23, 2006 @ 3:06 pm

Fuck embarassing. Don’t inhibit yourself. Pour on the emo girl.

ch50 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 3:29 pm

i love the poem! …….lolita?

ThatGuy_Matt said,

March 23, 2006 @ 4:33 pm

haha sweet picc

juryduty said,

March 23, 2006 @ 5:35 pm

i’d hit that =P

Ssweet_dreemzZ said,

March 23, 2006 @ 5:58 pm

That’s pretty. =D

hijinx7 said,

March 23, 2006 @ 6:29 pm

we fall down so we can learn how to pick ourselves up again

Kn1Hc said,

March 23, 2006 @ 6:55 pm

nice!!!

HotterBoy said,

March 23, 2006 @ 7:27 pm

i still wanna scratch your itch..don’t be shy, kim…that poem is indicative of someone who needs a long deep shagging. Perhaps, I can bang out the blahs?

CivicRacr said,

March 23, 2006 @ 8:28 pm

hey thats like my fantasy captured on camera…where did you get that…heh
poetry? emo? nah…life without expression is meaningless, unless you express it looking for pity, then thats just pitiful…
i pity the foo!… /mr. T

OkayChaSiuBao said,

March 24, 2006 @ 1:14 am

yes.. lolita… haha

crystalt728 said,

March 24, 2006 @ 3:18 am

Great poem!!! Cute pic!!!

MMbyB said,

March 24, 2006 @ 3:45 am

emo in some ways is just being in touch… and noone can fault one for that. nice poem! :)

… what’s a lotita’s complex dreamboat?

Duyen_the_Great said,

March 24, 2006 @ 5:50 am

i liked your poem.  sometimes i have the urge to write everything i feel but it’s hard for me to put it on paper.  =P  so i guess reading others’ poems will have to do =P

Duyen_the_Great said,

March 24, 2006 @ 5:51 am

ok i LIKE your poem not liked lol 

aydongbeeleef said,

March 24, 2006 @ 6:28 am

ryc: that’s haiku modern style.. 1up

Grex767 said,

March 24, 2006 @ 6:40 am

nice poem…..writing poems helps me deal with my feelings I think……

FictionalCharacter102 said,

March 24, 2006 @ 11:47 am

What does poetry have to do with the emo rage??Uh, yeah, Emo = Ralph Waldo Emerson.

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March 24, 2006 @ 12:03 pm

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chubbers234 said,

March 24, 2006 @ 12:45 pm

i like it. i think its cool that you are good at poetry. i personally like a girl that does poetry. if people make fun of you they aren’t smart people.

chubbers234 said,

March 24, 2006 @ 12:48 pm

i think that it’s cool that you write poetry. you should keep wirting poetry since your pretty good at it. it doesn’t sound like its all that emo.

MissAshleyXOXO said,

March 24, 2006 @ 12:53 pm

I hate the poetry/emo association and steroetype. I write poetry and I am the fuuuurthest you can get from “emo.”

dudego5 said,

March 24, 2006 @ 1:08 pm

nice i like the part naughty girls

hugglemonster said,

March 24, 2006 @ 2:12 pm

i love your poems.keep writing.we’re all emo deep down inside! Lots of Love and Luck

NebulaFyre said,

March 24, 2006 @ 4:29 pm

I love your poetry! I agree with dearmisery…..we all have this little emo kid in us waiting to get out and wreak havoc on the unsuspecting public. ^_^

Ethan said,

June 27, 2007 @ 8:09 am

Link…

The mind can assert anything and pretend it has proved it. My beliefs I test on my body, on my intuitional consciousness, and when I get a response there, then I accept…

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