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Monday February 7, 2005 at 09:12 am

It’s a BAT-TOOOOOOOH!

When I was little my good friend and I used to get really bored and pretend that we were freestyle artists. It was fun, trying to come up with something right there, whatever is on your mind. It didn’t always make sense, but it helped me learn how to use words more quickly.

Every once in a while, I would think of one so good I had to write it down. I love writing poetry or lyrics off the top of my head because I feel like, in a way, it’s more true, more pure.

I’m not trying to say that I was actually GOOD at it or anything, but… there’s really something special in my heart for poetry or lyrics that i’ve written off the top of my head without ever editing it

One such example of a poem that just flew from my fingers without stopping is this one:

Oh shit, fantacular as the MANtacular walks by/ I cry/ almost said bye bye / let him fly by/ but was sighed / a “don’t try to lie or fake your high/ just settle down your little frown/ let me love ya as the sun goes down”/ obstruction of the construction that was created for a good fuck-tion/ let me show you the true love story/ the old allegory / of unconditional care/ multi-dimensional pair/ connection on a different level/ bevel/ wake up make up disheveled/ Extensional is the forensical musical lair/ that holds the truth and beginning of the rather untypical pair/ up the stair do dare explore the meaning of sparing care/ but it dont matter cuz the splatter that shattes/ the dreams of little babies occured like rabies/ wild and daring crazy like maybe/ I want to/ bite you/ fight you/ spite you/ fuck you / stuff you / love you/ kiss you/ hold you/ miss you.


Battoh gear.

What is the first thing that is flowing out of your mind? right now? Doesn’t have to be poetry… =]

Love,
Kim
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honeynutmeg said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:15 am

jarboogie…just kidddddding! I PROMISE its funny to be in the same place as you when you come up with posts…i get such a weird perspective on things….welcome back to the apt, roomie!oh, and my beanie is famous…what now?!first?!

k_at_i_e_ste_r said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:23 am

haha thats a wicked funny pic
comment back

inkhelm said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:23 am

food of course!

Sup007 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:28 am

damn i’m asian who can’t rhymeposing i’m a rapper is a crime
ok i’ve run out of rhymes….hahaha i guess i won’t be the next greatest mc =Pp.s. there are some really good parts to your rhyme (and parts)…you should practice more you have potential to be a lot better…

naija_naija said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:30 am

haha…. stick figures make me chuckle (hey…. you did say the FIRST thing)
1
muoyo

JCFans said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:31 am

wow, i can see you as a great poet whose works will be studied by little kids in high school hahaha. not with all those vulgar words though lol.
and the first thing that came to my mind was: i’d like to see what you look like.

eriQTan said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:33 am

need more sleep… thats whats on my mind…

Tinatamad2001 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:54 am

Sex.. And perhaps food.. Food & sex together sounds great!..

picassosinatra said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:00 am

Having love for someone might hurt someone else…Steak is delicious…so is fresh squeezed juice…

riceboyx4u said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:04 am

i hunger for food. food i hunger

kalamai said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:20 am

HAHAHA i love the battle gear :D go kim!

lilluvlyan9el said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:21 am

wow… *amazed*
*blank* comes to my mind…
I think that I don’t think enough… then again, I haven’t really used my brain for the past 4 years (ever since Jr. yr. of high school started… stOopid boys).
a^2+b^2=c^2!!!

THEY’RE KICKING ME OUT OF THE LIBRARY AGAIN!!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ksiu1 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:24 am

roses are red, violets are blue….
you ain’t ready for this lyrical sifu. 
hahahah
i can’t rhyme for my life. 

arjel said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:25 am

of course i know who this is, kim =)IM me damn it!

ALN_with_an_E said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:26 am

next time in Vegas, hit me up we’ll go see “O”

BlindButDriving said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:37 am

Okay, I’ll bite. It’s actually the idea behind this screen name of mine. It’s copyrighted and what not. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9000405/ My DA >.>

JtOn812 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:51 am

hate homework and hate work, what else is there to do?

SaikoHapa said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:52 am

rofl..mic not ice cream…i would prefer the ice cream ;=P

nofa1r said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:54 am

yugi-oh is on the tube/i like to ride the lube/sometimes i get the blues/days go by so maybe/i dont like girls that wear maybelline/i want to go to ballstine/
i suck.
feel better!

lilasnx129 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 11:11 am

First thing that came to mind: You are so randomly awesome… and that does really look like ice cream, good thing you labeled your drawing.

jazzkitten57 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 11:20 am

haha…gangsta kim!
 yo here i go (haha) shi? what is that suppsed to mean? is it “she” without the “he” or is it short for shi shi (pee pee in japanese – i think)
i haven’t seen you for quite a while, but when i think about it, i smile, because all the while, its only a matter of some miles between us
just wait – everything will be great. at least that’s what they say, but you can only find and create your own meaning, your own way. 

CaKaLusa said,

February 7, 2005 @ 11:24 am

im wondering why your pants look like an overturned chipped martini glass.

Zot22 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 11:38 am

kim coughing…::cough:: ::cough::

JCFans said,

February 7, 2005 @ 11:38 am

RYC: okay, you’re a cerified hottie! thanks for sharing ;).
and, wanna show some skin now? haha kiddin’ lol.

frshsqzedoj said,

February 7, 2005 @ 11:54 am

sticks and stones may break my bones, wanna get some bbq and fuck?

frshsqzedoj said,

February 7, 2005 @ 11:56 am

if you want real poems i got a folder of the crap i’ve written over the years, ahha

onestyle said,

February 7, 2005 @ 12:20 pm

I kinda miss the days when I could get all fiery and think/writing feverishly. the kinda fiery that makes you feel like you can mentally slice another’s brain in half for *thinking* about stepping in your path.

urtoasted said,

February 7, 2005 @ 12:27 pm

sorry i let you down

lumpiablog said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:02 pm

this guy at my school can only freestyle about food. harcore? not really. but damn if he didnt own everyone at thanksgiving.

lumpiablog said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:03 pm

PS why are you orgasming in yur pic.

uhohishkat said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:08 pm

sorry if you can’t see anything. it probably  has to do with your internet explorer you are using.

i_am_fn_evil said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:11 pm

whoa…you had a dream just like mine too?!  hahaha…i likes your style!  but hey, yous gots a pretty fancy site here…me likes that too.

ManDiva said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:31 pm

It looks like you are having an orgasm on your avatar. It’s kind of… hot.

uhohishkat said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:33 pm

thank you for your input but i like the way i’m designing my page. i’m aware that there might be a few people who won’t be able to view my page properly but the majority seems to see it just fine, so i’m going to keep it that way. it most likely is your browser and it may also be do to the fact that i embedded the font i used  which requires it to be at 6pt so it’s super small and your browser might’ve used the default font instead. i don’t really know, i only use iexplorer. if your interested, here’s what the site is supposed to look like:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v179/uhohishkat/screenshot.jpg i lost some of the image quality converting it from bmp to jpg but you get the idea. haha screen shot just for you.. thank you for your honest constructive criticism (=

lowflyingsquab said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:39 pm

hey, i tried to make a comment in your xanga the other day, but it wouldn’t take. you have a very clever journal. why do the blue poles in my picture confuse you?

click_here_for_pics said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:43 pm

lovely xanger. ;P

viet_sexii_lipz said,

February 7, 2005 @ 1:52 pm

Your page is hot.

I want to make love to it in the rain woopdy wooo!  Random props, bye bye and take care.

iMiTaTioN_iz_SuiCiDe said,

February 7, 2005 @ 2:02 pm

damn i gotta tinkle….
straight up… thas first… so i guess i’ll get to it in a min….
but on the real, those words–and off the top of your head at that–really aint bad at all… wow… my rhymes would be soundin a straight up boo-boo-mess….
lata 

HYPNOTIQsoopafr3ssh said,

February 7, 2005 @ 2:25 pm

im in love w/ your banner

aznbro85 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 3:30 pm

that was a pretty sweet rhyme you made there kim..
the only thing flowing through my mind is all the fluids and shit that are slushing around in my head.. haha..
man… you so GANGSTA! xD

yupitssean said,

February 7, 2005 @ 4:05 pm

when she speaks to meIt’s sorta likeSmooth guitar strums picked ever so lightly On my hearts cordsPick by pickShe sends vibrationsJuxtapose sensationsTraveling north boundRhythmicallyAt two and a half miles per hourInsatiablyFrom the tip of my tail boneThrough each vertebrateThrough each nerve endingTo the top of my cranial cavityBringing mid conversational complexityMind stimulated Verbal ecstasyLike drip drops of ice cold red Kool-aidOn top of her sweet mental serenadesI can see colours in her wordsHear music in her tonesAnd feel love making in her speech
When she speaks to me …

cheers… lyrical genius!
 

gotlighters said,

February 7, 2005 @ 4:27 pm

nice rhyme you did there… yea i used to rap alot when i was in the 8th grade. even recorded some tracks on my computer but it was stupid. i made this one a while back about 2004 for me, but i thought i’d share it w/ another rapper. maybe we can do a collaboration sometime ;) haha jp.Man ’04 gon end in a few weeks, ’05 is nearIt’s crazy, ’04 was one rough yearSo many hardships and so many trials and tribulationsFrom January to now in DecemberEvery event ingrained in my head, forever I’ll rememberMakes me sit here and start contemplatingThey say what doesn’t kill you, makes you strongerThe year will end in a few weeks yet I feel I can’t take it any longerI feel backed up into a corner with no where to turnI try keep my head up, plant my ground and stay firmTried to keep my inner turmoil with myself insideBut out of no where I see tears fight to leave my eyesAcceptance was my only real destination in lifeTo give love and to be loved was my goal in lifeNow I deal with nothing but struggle and strifeNow I sit and play with the edge of a knifeNot a day passes where I don’t think of taking my lifeI think of what it’d be like if I felt no emotional painNo burden of suffering heart break, disappoints that cloud up my brainI sit and think how did I end up turning this wayI can’t blame anyone but myselfI did walk a path but I started to swayTurned shady and rejected everyone awayMaybe karma finally came back to slap me across the faceI open my soul to try to inhale this positive airInstead negativity’s choking me, I’m coughing with despairMy lungs tighten and hopelessness covers my faceWho’s going to be the one who grabs my waistAnd pump new life into me so that I wakeCause as of right now I feel like dyingI want to throw that white flag cause I’m tired of tryingI know I talked about this issue so many timesMaybe someone will pay attention now that it’s made into a rhymeit’s not as ill as YOUR rhyme though. haha

estoychino said,

February 7, 2005 @ 4:40 pm

heh.wish i had schkillz like that

itz_mEEh_LiL_ONE said,

February 7, 2005 @ 4:54 pm

hellerz…
          deng gurl..i culd say ur poetic..lolz..neweiz nice site u have hir…prop back if u have the time…love ur lil picture u have there..hehehhe

dorkette9192 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 4:55 pm

Hello. I am running for xanga of the month and I was wondering if you could vote for me. You have to go to http://www.xanga.com/username_donations and vote for me. Hopefully you vote for me and if you do I’ll give you sum “appreciation props”

dorkette9192 said,

February 7, 2005 @ 6:22 pm

You’re rude. SOrry if it’s hard for you to be nice.

sKyHiGhPnAi said,

February 7, 2005 @ 6:35 pm

can i have some of that ice cream?.. ;)

projectblogsphere said,

February 7, 2005 @ 6:37 pm

First thing on my mind right now?  “What is the madpimp doing when taking that profile pic?”
BTW, who won “SuperBOWL! Black VS. HelloKitty”? 
ryc:  You don’t sleep-xanga?  Am I the only one??

Thoughts_from_my_dick said,

February 7, 2005 @ 6:56 pm

i like ur site.
u r cool.
whenever anyone asks me for a rhyme, i always think of skee lo.

dyZ said,

February 7, 2005 @ 7:12 pm

prez day wknd is next wknd. why does nobody kno this… am i retarded or somethin? don’t answer that.
i cant spit lines but i can tear up the dance flo

PsYkOxAzNxFrEaK said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:32 pm

kim why you so ganGsta! lovely profile picture btw! as for what’s on my mind.. funny you mention that.. i use to play a game to get myself out of brains farts and get my creative juices flowing. the game is easy. in 30 seconds write down EVERYTHING that is going through your mind… here’s my 30 seconds..startinnnngggggg.. now! – Kim- cool beans – hope to meet at DCON- DCON- thinking about running for LTG- however, what if i dont make it to UCB- UCB – B- BLOWJOB! – poke a girl in the eye last time i got a bj- would always IM her starting with the smiley… ;) as an inside joke- joke – ryhmes with poke – brainfart- brainfart- i love girls who *fart*! .. alright.. there ya go.. that’s what was on my mind (for the last 30 sec.)

NeeGa_BruCe said,

February 7, 2005 @ 9:40 pm

nice…. very impressive

HotterBoy said,

February 7, 2005 @ 10:36 pm

you have a natural, arty flow with words and ideas…. and the orgasm pic is beautiful

molochio_aderre said,

February 8, 2005 @ 12:01 am

It’s really quite enchanting… Your inspiration?

vannguyen0 said,

February 8, 2005 @ 5:51 am

sticks and stones may break my bones, but whips and chains excite me

timothyj said,

February 8, 2005 @ 5:55 am

honestly the first thing that goes through my head is that you’re a/ awesome and b/ have a really mess room. can i clean it up? and ur profile pic is all moany. makes me mad horney.. oh shit that rhymed. woot.

crewj said,

February 8, 2005 @ 7:30 am

poetry!

MabeMabe said,

February 8, 2005 @ 7:46 am

Hi, I was just crusing through and looked at your portifolio.  I’m very impress.  I love the rainy kiss drawing you did. 

darlingdavis said,

February 8, 2005 @ 7:46 am

Hello, just dropping by, you were on featured content.anyway, you remind me of my girlfriend. she loves writing poetry and songs and stuff. :) oh i’m so proud of her. well, what’s the first thing in my mind…my gf LeAnn…she means the world to me. but sometimes…things just…oh i dont know :( enough about me, nice xanga
Love, Darling

seantheobscure said,

February 8, 2005 @ 8:52 am

today, i tried writing something more or less freestyle that i could show my friend so it could be made into some lyrics for our musical project thing, but it ended up being really dumb.

sexysoccerdude11 said,

February 8, 2005 @ 9:00 am

Rap on, rap on…I would lay down something fierce but I am afraid of being obliterated.

ifso said,

February 8, 2005 @ 10:57 am

mm. sleep and counterpoint.

Lucibel" target="_blank said,

February 8, 2005 @ 11:12 am

Worship me!

forceofnature said,

February 8, 2005 @ 2:09 pm

ice cream – but that’s your fault cause you had to go and bring it up. :-P

riceboyx4u said,

February 8, 2005 @ 3:09 pm

haha that face is priceless! =D

lbmonkey said,

February 8, 2005 @ 9:35 pm

///slash/slash/slash/i really need some cash/imma separate, catergorize, and put in order–these words of mine with grammatical horror! Ooh! an exclamation point!  EH?  A question mark?  Uncalled for & unnecessary & an ampersand… (elipsis)* in parenthesis with an asterisk denoting a footnote. And I’ll close with a ~ tilde. 

endLezluv3 said,

February 8, 2005 @ 9:39 pm

cute!!!!

MagikalFairy666 said,

February 9, 2005 @ 9:13 pm

Thanks for getting back to me, didn’t think you would have time seeing as how there are about a million comments on here. Ya, I’m married. We’ve been together for five years, and we get along fine, and love eachother alot. Thank you for caring about what I said, and not getting all defensive like most people do. You have a beautiful soul, Blessed Be to Thee

hugscookies83 said,

February 10, 2005 @ 5:49 am

Glad to know that we feel the same about this..hehehe..
~Chris & Tika~

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